All Comments on 'Dream Come True Ch. 03'

by Imaginatrix

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very good

Was a very very good story. Only thing you might want to improve on is making it better known who is talking or thinking. Got a little confusing at times.

chellebchellebabout 16 years ago
Wow

Very well written. Very fitting title - You've captured exactly how it should be.

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