by Tomsparty
I enjoyed this story very much but I do love anything to do with cross dressing and the feminisation of the male form.
go home by yourself and throw out all of your girlie clothes. Be a man and grow some gonads. Don't let her turn you into her bitch. If you can't see what she is doing, then you are better off living alone the rest of your life. Any conniving woman that will twist you this way and that way, making you into something THEY wand is nothing be a BITCH. As a matter of fact, she is probably a TOP BITCH and wants to use a strap on on you. Now, do you see who wears the pants between the two of you?
Found this story very hard to understand, since it is often unclear who is speaking. Besides, the main character seems to suffer from a serious lack of common sense.
The story was pretty predictable about half way through, it had some good ideas, but knowing the end, it got a little tedious. The whole meta-physical thing of "you are Julia" was a little heavy for an erotic tale, especially to just throw that in at the end...I think you should drop this and finish the "close shave" story line. Still love your stuff! michelleinmd
your story is one of self discover and is well done and goes the way one would. Jule and Lucy should be tougher in the end .. the story feels very natural ..