All Comments on 'Dream Love Continues'

It would be a grand love affair,to have both the mother and the sister in the young mans bed. I'm sure that he would be up to the task to satisfy them both. Eventually both the women would have their bellies full of his children, which would make more of an intertwined love affair for the three of them. Thank You for the beautiful loving story...Rich

wow what a fantastic very erotic story.great writing

excellent story. do hope there is more of this story to come.

Hot stuff. Please give us more, she is one nasty mom and worth a lot more than 2 chapters. So much more she can do I'm sure.

<p>This is for the anonymous person who sent this private feedback to my e-mail box this weekend (reading this, you know who you are):</p><p>"Only the most insecure, lame-assed writer-wannabes choose not to allow public comments. Given the crap I just read, I guess I understand why you'd rather suffer in silence than allow those of with college educations and backgrounds in writing to ridicule your stupidity and total lack of writing skills."</p><p>Firstly, your claim of my not allowing public comments is incorrect; that feature has been active since this story was approved. If you were unable to leave one, that was most likely a technical issue and beyond my purview; contact the webmaster to resolve it. In the meantime, your criticism has now been published for all to see.<p><p>Secondly, you were also wrong in intimating that I don't have a four-year college education; I do, in fact, have one.</p><p>Finally, as for your dislike of my story...well, I never expected to have universal approval; but comments public and private thus far have been mostly positive, so I'm satisfied. However, since you claim a superior skill, by all means write a story of your own to show me how you feel it should be done.</p><p>(A word of explanation: Since I was required to rate my own story in order to post this, I gave it a median rating so neither I nor anyone else will feel I have a unduly large ego :))</p>

You have talent. Carry on with this storyline or try something else either way I am sure you will do fine. By the way it is quite alright to give your story your own top marks. After all the reader who sent you the email probably gave you a ZERO you are just making up for that. Don't worry about it. but you have certainly done the right thing by ignoring people like him or her. Looking forward to your next story.

You have a sexy way of expressing yourself and you have written a very good and sexy story here. Well done.

Was every bit as good as part one except for the last paragraph when out of the blue, a man is stirred into the mix. I know people who like lesbian stories and others who like straight stories but I don't know anyone who likes to read about some one who is gay a little while and then bounces back to straight for a little while and then turns back gay. I think some writers fall so much in love with their creations that they deny the possibility that they might have a fault. Then apparently they consider lesbianism as a "fault" and attempt to claim their character is not "really" gay, just merely experimenting a little, just a little fooling around. I think this is a weakness of men who write lesbian stories. I've never read a story about a man who just "fools around" with homosexual sex. No those stories are usually written by gay men and they don't mind depicting their characters as gay, they don't look at that as some sort of fatal character flaw.