All Comments on 'Dream Lover Pt. 04'

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prinnaveaprinnaveaabout 6 years ago
Interesting

I liked the story plot,it seem to flow well easy to read. Question though, what happens to you when you return to your body, messy bed,sweaty body? Might expand on that a bit. Hope to see another chapter or two, maybe one with a hubby sleeping next to the prey. You say you can just disappear all at once, might be a nice twist.

Vivid dreaming is something I have always questioned, was I there in a different dimension, or was I just vividly dreaming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
pet peeve

this isn't part 4... it's chapter 6 and 7.

i almost skipped over it, because my note said we were through chapter 5

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I've always had a vivid imagination and fantasizing about the women who have passed through my life goes back as long as I can remember. Upon discovering online erotica, I started to think that maybe I should go ahead and write down some of these fantasies and submit them to ...

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