All Comments on 'Dream Lovers Ch. 04'

I have read the first 4 chapters and plan to read the rest. I like the story so far. The problem with the story is that it needs to be edited again. Who ever has done your editing is bad because they are missing too many errors. You have repeatedly used the word SET instead of SIT. You have many typo errors and wrong words in your story. These errors take away from your style and flow of the story.