All Comments on 'Dream Sequence Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
a really intiguing start to a story

I can't wait for more chapters to find out what's going on. You did have a lot of typos or spellcheck errors, making your writing confusing at times.

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