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by Ed0613

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Lovely Erotic!

His woman lovingly gives him a bath telling him, "after this you can do me." A sweet relationship is displayed throughout this entire story. The ending will come as a surprise. A quiet pleasant Read.

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...