All Comments on 'Dreams Ch. 01'

Hi, your story has an interesting premise, and I like where it's going. Just wanted to mention, the 'music-makers' quote at the start isn't from Willy Wonka - he was quoting Arthur O'Shaughnessy: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arthur_O%27Shaughnessy

As I said, intriguing premise handled well. Looking forward to more.

Definitely wanting to see where this leads.

The quote is from the movie, but I did not know it was a quote from somewhere else...will change that so it is updated, thanks!

The second chapter hopefully will be done soon which gives a bit more to the storyline. This was an idea that suddenly popped into my head while working on my Annie series. I don't usually read much Mind Control stuff, but this one just "fit" in that category.

A great start, interesting to see what else Tom has in store. Would work best IMHO if its not just about Melanie, but other women become dreams too.

Great premise! This will be one to watch.

your story was very interesting and I would love to see more :) Can't wait for the next part :)

Great concept. Unusual as hell. I can't wait to see where the series(?) gets to. Keep up the outstanding work!

The comics name is Ron White and he's was dam funny I have not seen a new special by him in a while he may have taken his million invested it reasonably well and hung it up.

Yeah, I knew who it was...I simply wanted to leave a little "unknown" for the reader and not drop names!

And yeah, haven't seen anything new from him in a while...

Appreciate it!