All Comments on 'Dreams Do Come True'

by AlexisPeignoir

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Ah, Alexis, I think you've captured the pent-up lust and longing of two lovers wonderfully. When the time is finally right, the past is gone, the future remains to be determined, and they finally can pleasure each other. Lovely, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I think that was a slip up.

Some writers accidentally have spelling lapses that can mess with the people reading the story. So I can forgive that little mishap. But not bad for a quick read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
dreams do come true

Alisha wasn't beautiful at her wedding? Pity the poor ugly girl. Must be every man's fantasy to have an ugly bride and sister-in-law.

kafkafabout 6 years ago
Very good

I liked that a lot.

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