by BrainVamp
Everyone will just laugh at what I say.
No matter how I try to say it right.
That is one badass mc, wish there was more to come. If this was a TV show, this is when she begins massacring a lot of people.(better vamp plot than most vamp stories). I'm going to bookmark this and read it again sometime.
How can a guy be a benevolent ruler and a tyrant at the same time. Your introduction ruined the story for me. You start off saying that he is a good and just man, but then in the next sentence you tell me he is an evil dictator who conquered lands. Inconsistencies like this can deter a reader.
It really would have been nice if the writer had finished this wonderful story instead of teasing readers with an excellent 1st part but then NO MORE. I hate all writers that do this to the readers of their stories. I would have given this excellent story 5-STARS but since it is unfinished, only 1-STAR. Retired Army NCO
Sorry that you didn't like it.
The idea behind this and all Erin stories is to see this little girl struggle against all sorts of vampire transformations. She's not like Sandra, she's not a teenage vampire, she a teenager turning into a vampire. With her what makes me tick when I write is her slow and not so slow corruption, not the mayhem she'll wreak afterwards.
Another thing: I'm not able to answer to the feedback you send because the email that is given to me in the messages doesn't seem to work. If you want to chatter send me another feedback with a working email and I'll be glad to chat with you.
Cheers.
Keep on commenting it's always apreciated.