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by MadQuill

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ffemt53ffemt53almost 10 years ago
Good Work

The story developed the characters a little to fast and the sex scenes could have been a little more drawn out, but other then that it held my attention all the through.

It has been a very long time since that has happened.

Good job and keep up the good work.

4 out of 5 Stars.

MadQuillMadQuillalmost 9 years agoAuthor
a year ago, ;-) . I meant later

this story is really about Madeline and how she defines her place in a world where her love and character will lead to a future. Tess' specialness seems to drive the events but Maddy is accepting and is in charge. A seventh chapter is underway.

It surprises me that several lesbians have suggested privately that this version of gender relations was unknown to them. Women will find a way.

I do wish there was more feedback, though the theme makes that what it is.

Read all and enjoy each day, I do.

Madquill

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent

5 Stars! Very well paced.

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