by MadQuill
The story developed the characters a little to fast and the sex scenes could have been a little more drawn out, but other then that it held my attention all the through.
It has been a very long time since that has happened.
Good job and keep up the good work.
4 out of 5 Stars.
this story is really about Madeline and how she defines her place in a world where her love and character will lead to a future. Tess' specialness seems to drive the events but Maddy is accepting and is in charge. A seventh chapter is underway.
It surprises me that several lesbians have suggested privately that this version of gender relations was unknown to them. Women will find a way.
I do wish there was more feedback, though the theme makes that what it is.
Read all and enjoy each day, I do.
Madquill