All Comments on 'Dressing to Thrill'

But I buy all my clothes online. Thanks for the story was well written. Only negative was the weird American lady at the end. Hope you continue the story, but with the two girls, not with her. I gave it four stars.

Loved the story.

Thanks Heaps

Thank you for taking the time to leave comments. I’m so pleased you both like my story - I haven’t written erotica in a few years, and I’ve really enjoyed jumping back into it. To the first commenter, I’m sorry you didn’t like my little voyeuristic addition at the end, but your advise is very very helpful, I’ll definitely be keeping that in mind, so your feedback is much appreciated, cheers! 😊

Sexy and hot.

I liked the American voyeur at the end it added to the already risky hot situation.

I feel like looking for that shop now and hoping to find a kindly helpful lady in the next cubicle.

Well written and sexy as they cum.

Thank you

Thank you Stroudle, so very glad you enjoyed it. Oh and if you can’t find a Medusa’s Cavern then I very highly recommend going for a bra fitting, in the sexiest bra you already own, having researched the shop to ensure you get a little honey of a fitter to your taste.

Of course, that’s if you are indeed female!? I just assumed, didn’t check your profile 😳 In that case ...in the sexiest bra your wife/girlfriend/mother/next door neighbour already owns, if you are not 😉

Mmmmmm puffy nipples perfectly presented

This is a complete 10, wait there is only 5, okay 5 stars for you. I liked that your main character and her companion were completely spent after half hour of complete and utter satisfaction. The ending scene was a nice touch too. What kind of store was that? No one was there to check on them all the time they were doing it. Seems like a sexy twilight zone for needy women.

I'm excited to get those five stars, so it’s much appreciated.

Duly noted. But, It actually took longer for the girls to be completely spent. (Ah, the stamina of the young fit and healthy... damn them.) The half hour the voyeur at the end of the story alluded to was the time spent ‘enjoying’ their tryst from the next cubicle - before she thought she was caught on when the door opened, and the cum soaked stool was shunted into the corridor. That’s when she got on to the stool outside and rocked herself to dizzy heights, watching them through a gap in the door as the girls hotted up. And yes, how come the shop assistant got away with shirking her duties for so long!? I can only imagine it’s a huge store with too many staff members to keep account of. It must be a huge store as the changing rooms were so plentiful, with all those cubicles branching off in nooks and crannies... the fortuitous reason they weren’t interrupted by anyone other than the voyeur surely?

Now I’ve gone and over explained my clumsy timeline etc, haven’t I!? 😳😳😳 I should’ve just used the poetic license excuse. 😁 Hope the slight suspension of reality didn’t spoil the story too much! Thanks again for the stars and comments!! 👍🏻

I loved this story. I'm a big fan of tribbing and enjoyed that unlike most stories this one included more than just a few seconds of tribbing. I also liked that the sex occurred in a somewhat public place.

There was just the right amount of detail as well. I have a feeling this story will become my new standby!

Hawt