by rwsteward
A truly great love story. The best love stories tell not just about the two lovers, but also how their love and its development, problems and all, involve and affect others. Here you include an early love and the next generation.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
P.S. Can't help but pick a nit: "public hairs" are NOT "pubic hairs". ;-)
I'm surprised this hasn't been favourited more! However it does show by it's high score that it is a quality piece of writing. Thanks for writing
I finished Maggie's story and had to start Drew's immediatly! Dang it was so good I had to finish tonight! Thanks for wonderful love story. I won't be mad if there is a follow up with Avery!!!! Thanks again...keep the romance coming...it is your niche!!!!!
P.S. I loved Andy also...next time I'll login!
Cindi47
almost didn't make it as a family or a couple.
A great pair of stories. Thank you for sharing them. On a more personal note, my husband and I celebrated our 32th anniversary this last August. Like Maggie and Drew, we suffered our ups and downs before leveling out. The only difference was that I was the one who had the heart attack from overwork. Again, a pair of outstanding stories my friend.
Very good story, which would have benefited vastly, from some serious editing!! You change tense in the same SENTENCE!!! Other than that, a nicely put together plot. 5*s.
What was the point of having them be secretly rich? It detracted from the story & made them seem less relatable.
Maggie is a bitch. The doctor seemed unprofessional to a point. Suddenly being millionaires with all that money was unnecessary but guess it explains the bitch Maggie's lifestyle yet she couldn't hire someone to wash the dishes or do the laundry
Honestly this wasn't Drew's story. This was story of Maggie and AJ.
Poor Drew is still waiting for someone to write about him.