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by bigmikey357

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great Story

Really enjoyed it thank you and please keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Best by any standard.

A complete tale, so well told it seems out of place in this venue. Character development, story line focus, outrageous passions artfully expressed. Professional work, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Extremely well written, well told, original

I normally don't make it thru many of these stories. This one held my interest from beginning to end, was very well written and left me wanting a sequel. Great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Really enjoyed this

Great writing. If there's more, I'd love to read it.

evebroughtanaxthistimeevebroughtanaxthistimealmost 8 years ago

Yep. If you trained it, you might as well keep it.

Shot for story.

hylas_hylas_over 7 years ago

Well written, I enjoyed it!

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I love to write, although I do not always have time to do so. I am by no means a great writer, but I do think I'm pretty good. In life as in writing, I do my best to get better everyday, improve with every experience. That being said, all feedback is appreciated, even if wh...