All Comments on 'Drilling Aunt Lily Ch. 01'

Well, okay story but pretty sure just reworded from another not long ago posted here. Still just as difficult to read...

.. that English is NOT your first language. It would do you well to get an editor to help with the stilted translation from your native tongue.

Please do so and resubmit your work.

3/5 for the effort so far

Please use correct english, u is you, and ur is your.

Please don't bother continuing. If you are going to write, write English without those text message contractions. You are not limited to any specific number of characters which is the only possible excuse for contractions.

Your story is disjointed and incoherent at times.

Although the 'aunt' said they were not blood relations, therefore no incest was involved, yet you put this story in the 'Incest' category.

The story shows promise but what about the language, even mine is better than yours and I'm a bit dislexick. (Spell check is life saver for me)

It reads like a story that was written in a different language and was translated by Google.

It goes beyond the way the author misspells words and ignores standard rules of proper grammar. The author continually used phrases and styles that ring "WRONG" to ears for whom English IS a primary language. So my first question would be, "What IS your first language?" And my second question would be, "How would YOU feel if someone who didn't have a solid grasp on YOUR language submitted a story? Would you take it seriously or just find it irritating, as most of the comments seem to be doing?" And finally, my comment would be, as others have written, "If you can't write well, or at least competently, don't write. Or at least don't share."

I stopped reading about half way down the first page, not only is the grammar piss poor, but it's definitely not incest!! Look up the definition of incest and if you can't write any better, then PLEASE STOP!!!

Yes, her so-called nephew has a wonderful, hot body to kiss, touch, suck and screw her brains out. This is now a very HOT and arousing story. We have to have another chapter where her nephew licks, kisses and sucks all the wonder places on her body, her boobs / nipples, pussy lips and clit until he bangs her senseless. Let him show her how a young, horny college student handles horny lady like her. Very very good. Thanks !!

This young man cannot write or understand what he has written. The story is studded with expressions that are simply unbelievably bad and ungrammatical. He needs more that an editor - he needs training in basic english. Give up, please. Why he was allowed to publish here is a source of mystery too.

If you're going to write in my language (English), at least respect it enough to be fluent and capable of speaking it idiomatically, This was...fucking terrible, extremely poorly written, in a language you plainly don't understand, riddled with misspellings and inconsistencies of grammar and comprehension, so no stars, and a heartfelt hope you find another hobby, because writing is not one of your strengths, and on the evidence presented here, never will be.

I have you 3* for the idea and read it to the end, but...

then wished I hadn't.

The grammar was indeed confusing and the language too unatural.

Disappointing.

Best keep to your own tongue and try on an (Indian?) site, rather than give up altogether.