All Comments on 'Driveway Desire'

Loved your story....as I said...will make for some very very good bedtime reading.

Hot expressive passions and burning lust provided a hard furious ride of pleasure that pleased over and over again.

Extremely well-written. Although I had to think twice when I got to the line about the woman's "furry fanny", until I remembered that where you come from the fanny is the front side (in the U.S. "fanny" is "butt"). I only have one suggestion for improvement: rather than telling about what is happening and what it looks like, you might want to think about describing sensations, feelings, give the story a little tactile body.

...sigh...when's it my turn? lol

Great one!

sweet_marie