by bored_doe
Great story, really enjoyed it, will you perhaps write further story/chapter ?
Only critic i could offer is its very fast paced, you could slow down a little.
Please add another chapter with further dominance by the sitter.
there is a special feeling being dominated by a much younger woman one just turning 20 or so. They should look up to and respect their elder, but you know you are in for a hard time when they gain the dominate role over you.
I've read this and your other work. I think you are pretty good and I hope you keep writing. So many good writers on this site and you are one of them. I wish you would take the time to complete this and expand your other stories. You have a gift for rendering sexual tension. You have a gift for writing, period, so I hope you are working hard at developing your considerable talent.
Thanks for the compliments! I'm always on the lookout for that flash of inspiration that will develop into a story. I will keep writing, and hope you keep enjoying!
Well this is a superb story with the right mix or emotions and action. Any sexual story needs emotion as much as it needs the acts and your story depicts these beautifully. I too would recommend you to finish the story and add the right amount of passions and emotions to make it look as realistic as possible.