All Comments on 'Drug Makes her Addicted to Semen Ch. 03'

by SteveStillLooks

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More!

Keep on writing. This is wonderful. Maybe he gets a new drug, to imrpove his performance?

EinfachTollEinfachTollover 6 years ago
oh wow!

Damn, that hot as fuck how you described how that sperm hunted down that egg and how it broke through and inseminated her. Please keep writing! :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Future problems

Maybe one catches him with one of the other women in the next chapter

VorstenVorstenover 6 years ago
3 out of 3

cuckolded 3 men out of 3.

C_frommnC_frommnover 6 years ago
Who's Next?

He has a Latina , Blonde & Asian so what is next on his Smorgasboard.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I know it all happened cuz the script said so but...

If I was the guy I would have convinced Keri I was into s&m zip tie her to my bed and get her husband on the phone saying it was an emergency

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Part 4?

Any idea when part 4 will land?

C_frommnC_frommnabout 6 years ago
RED

he has a Latina , Asian , Brunette the Next should be a Red Head, Like Maria's friend. Maybe she catches Maria and he has to keep her from saying anything.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

This is such a good story that I can't wait for part four.

SteveStillLooksSteveStillLooksabout 6 years agoAuthor
More coming!

I'm working on parts 4 and 5....taking a bit of time because I'm really busy now, but they're coming. Thanks very much to those who gave me positive feedback....very appreciated and I'd love to hear your comments!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
News?

Any news on when the next parts will appear?

BlueDragon45BlueDragon45almost 6 years ago
Parts 4 and 5

Still waiting on parts 4 and 5. Please post an update

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Best Yet

This is my fave of the series so far.

Hope to read more about Keri.

Keri inspired by any real life counterpart?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice

If he really did not want to do her then he could’ve put a condom on but it’s fine cause it gave us this much better story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Why not anal..

if he didn’t want to get Keri pregnant? Don’t tell me his chemically fused super sperm are going to rip through her outbox to get to her ovaries? It should be as effective as oral is at quenching his subjects needs without inpregnating them (again assuming his sperm can’t make its way from the stomach/digestive tract to the ovaries.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fantastic!!!

To the commenter from 3 years prior, the doc in the first chapter explained why condoms would be useless. That said Steve should have tried a condom so we could have seen Keri ripping it off his cock. As for the other comment involving anal, these chemically enhanced super swimmers should be able to find there way.

My thoughts; it was fun to see the tables turned and Steve actually being a good friend, thus being reluctant about it. But being a good friend he could not let her get addicted to just anybody's sperm could he.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Superbly thought out , probably the best written erotic story I have ever read. Timing and pace so so well measured , many many thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Let that be a lesson to you: listen well. And don't go snoopin'! Or you might end up impregnated and addicted to some guy's semen. Or something like that.

Hope Steve doesn't start going all soft. Embrace the alpha! Spread your seed. Claim them all. Although he might want to get a less potent version (in terms of the frequency they need to be inseminated) before increasing the harem or he'll never get a moment's peace and his dick will be fucking sore. This certainly is an entertaining ride so far.

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