All Comments on 'Druids of Nicasio'

by Fortunetson

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gordo12gordo12about 10 years ago
Not sure what I just read?

The story makes little sense and the first two sentences are soooo awkward.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
First - get a GREAT editor!

Because this was a complete cluster fuck. Two - get a better story line. This one was unintelligible. Three - don't make your cardboard characters dumber than rocks. There was nothing original, clever, interesting or entertaining about this mess.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
UH

WHAT???????????????????????????

FortunetsonFortunetsonabout 10 years agoAuthor
Some liked the story, some didn't

Sorry, this was reality for me back then. I may have been smart in some ways but, yes, I was dumber than a rock as the world of horny women unfolded before me. I grew up with 3 brothers and it wasn't until I was married that I had my eyes opened to who and what I could attract. It took my wife and her thirty some odd gorgeous female irish cousins to get me over my shyness. I didn't resist much and it's been a helluva ride. You'll see as I add more stories. I don't have to make much up.

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