All Comments on 'Drummer Boy - The Call Ch. 01'

I gave it 5 stars, can't wait for the next one!!!

...and your pacing and description are top-notch. Excellent job!

A great start to a 1st story in Lit. I look forward to reading more. Easily worth 5 stars.

0 stars!

I stopped reading halfway through. My reasons were (now I didn't finish but this is how I currently see it):

- I think there is way too much going on here. While that's not always a bad thing, what you really detail is of little importance to me or the story as I currently see it.

- The guy acts like a deuchebag with his thoughts about going around Kristin, him being high and mighty, and that he acts like a push over. I mean what Kristin gets mad about him doing, having little respect for her, is the same thing done to him by his band mates, having little respect for him.

- In the beginning you say he packed the car himself because no one touches his truck but how did the other guy get his keys to leave in his truck? Also who in their right mind takes someone's car from them without telling them? Obviously the guy has ZERO respect for the drummer which to me, is mind boggling, because this type of disrespect is usually shown in, unchallenged, increasing levels up to an action like this, which shows the guy has no spine.

That being said, it was extremely well written and organized I just didn't like the content. Though it had the makings of an extremely interesting plot from what I read in the description. I might try again later. Thanks :)

Curiosity got the better of me, skipped to the last half of the last page of this chapter then went to the next chapter (still currently reading). I am enjoying the story...it's very intriguing about what's going to happen next :)