All Comments on 'Drunk and Vulnerable at Jack's Bar'

Loved it -- great writing!

This the hotest story I have read in a long time - more please

I OFTEN fantasize about experiencing something like this. I can only imagine how beautiful it must be to be seduced for the first time by an older, understanding gay man who knows how to gently turn-out a curious, "straight" guy who's dreamed about this kind of encounter for years. What a lovely story. I'm sure our young friend will be visiting Peter in the days and weeks ahead. I wish I could join them.

This was so hot and sweet, please write more.

I felt like I went through the experience, your writing was so clear. Hope you continue to write, especially "gay male."

Hi Little Pink Panties - thanks for sharing this story. You write really well and this is a very believable scenario. I hope you continue to write.

You had me visualizing this scenario perfectly through most of it and I felt like I was there. My cock was hard and dripping all the way to the end.

so erotic and what a turn on. perfect combination.

THE hottest story that I have read on here by far

I like the slow, systematic seduction! The pace greatly enhanced the eroticism!

Just what I am longing for seducing a man. I love the passionate kissing that opens the door for total seduction!

This has got to be in the top 5 of my favorite stories. I wish my first time was something as loving and purposeful as this story depicted! Then maybe I wouldn't still be so discreet and untrusting of others.

You wrote things like, "Peters hand went to the back of my neck and squeezed gently, massaging my muscles as he gripped my hair line. I was dizzy from drinks and excitement and he easily coaxed my head downward as he pulled his robe open further." "he was a patient teacher." "he began moaning along with me, and his precum began flowing even faster, to the point where it was filling my mouth and I had to swallow." "Swallowing his precum was turning me on." "I felt his body stiffen and his finger began to gently pump in and out of my ass moments before the first jet of hot cum filled my mouth, followed quickly by another."

"He climbed on top of me and pressed his lips to mine while spreading my legs wide. Resting his body weight on me as he kissed me deeply, his cock lined up with my hole. All it took was a gentle push of his hips and the head slipped inside."

"He wrapped his arms around me and kissed me while continuing to push deeper until his cock was all the way inside me." "Peters orgasm seemed to last forever as his cock throbbed and pulsed inside me. "We fell asleep together as we embraced.

"Peter felt me stir and pulled me close to him, snuggling up behind me while wrapping his arms around me. I've never felt safer or more comfortable in my life as he kissed my ear and petted me back to sleep."

Why can't I have that kind of love !? I know why! Just sayin'

Still a "virgin," and would love to have a "first time" as erotic as this.

VERY well written erotic account of a man's first experience with another Man. Thank you for writing and posting.