All Comments on 'Dry Valley Ch. 12'

by SEVERUSMAX

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jushornyjushornyalmost 18 years ago
Smitten

Excellent Chapter SEVERUSMAX! Bailey would be foolish to leave a man that feels as Tom does! With any luck maybe Tom and Mitch can have a double wedding LOL! Seems to me Tom is quite smitten with Bailey

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyalmost 18 years ago
Ain't love grand. . .

A very well written letter. It speaks of Tom and his attitude of shooting from the hip and letting the girl know how he feels. Another great addition to the story. ~ Red

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Now we're cutting to the chase

SEVERUSMAX:

At least in Tom's and Bailey's case. The ball is in her court. Will she surrender to her fears or surrender her heart? This romantic Horny 'ol Sailor can only hope for the best. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
great continuation

Loved the letter. How could she walk away from him. Can't wait to read more. Thanks.

gotwood49gotwood49almost 18 years ago
very nicely written, Max

That sounded like Tom talking...from the hip, in his usual way, as I'd imagine it. I'm anxious to see what Bailey does now! Thanks for keeping the character true to what was begun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
awwww

he says it not sappy or anything but damn the girl would have to be a fool if she couldnt see it was straight from the heart. so again awwww.

-Girlie

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