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by The_Mercyslayer

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mexbearlllmexbearlllover 13 years ago
Great Start

can't wait to read more .

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please post the next one soon

damn would I love to get my wife trained!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
editing

Not very well written. Really needs editing - wrong words, missing letters, etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

When can I send my wife?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Enjoyed ur story can't wait for the next chapter. Only sujestion is to profread the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Great storyline! I'm looking forward to reading more. However, how can you submit a story without proof reading it first?...brutal spelling and typos!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Okay

I liked the idea but there was no description of the sex scene etc.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Samanthasssssssssssssssssssssssscockkkkkkkkkkkahhhhhhhhhhhhh

sounds so fucking horny i want MASTERS COCK PUMPED DEEPIN MY MAN CAVE

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I wish .....

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