by The_Mercyslayer
Not very well written. Really needs editing - wrong words, missing letters, etc.
Enjoyed ur story can't wait for the next chapter. Only sujestion is to profread the next one.
Great storyline! I'm looking forward to reading more. However, how can you submit a story without proof reading it first?...brutal spelling and typos!
sounds so fucking horny i want MASTERS COCK PUMPED DEEPIN MY MAN CAVE