All Comments on 'Due Diligence Ch. 02'

in the next to last sentence. TK U MLJ LV NV

first part. And no I did not finish reading this part either. What a waste of time.

For a stroke piece I suppose it's okay, however, in the literary sense it's lacking a definitive presence. There is no background, no buildup, no twist. There are, at best, hints behind a veil, but that's all. And the plot is...well, there is no real plot. In short, it's as if someone transcribed a short of a porn video. The writing is decent, but all the descriptive prose in the world won't help if there is nothing to grab the reader. Unless, all they want to do is some grabbing.

Pure garbage

The public is not buying this preverted toilet leavings..

sex crazed cornhole loving, nothing like a trip up the poopchoot

And, the answer is: a perverted fool.

It took over 20 years for her to find out he would supply studs for her?

With the way she looked - is this strange lover really new?

Some stories are bad, some are truly awful, and then there's this fetid garbage smelling up the site.