by JBEdwards
As a woman and a blond this story is trash. Insultingly moronic. Stereotypical male bullshit.
Butterflygal
This takes the idea of unreliable narrator to a new low. Basically everything the narrator told us on page 1 is complete bullshit.
Hi. One of the real problems with the story is that Michelle's goal does not match her intelligence. If she was going to MIT to get a PhD, she would be using sex to achieve something far harder and valuable than how to play a dumb, which most smart girls figure out quickly, especially if their attractive. Consider reworking it and giving her a more difficult goal, with much more at risk, matched against far more than guys who are barely smarter than her dumb alter ego.
My mom used to tell me that’s men prefer blondes but marry brunettes 🔥