by m_storyman_x
Interesting to see how you play out the rest of this series.
Great story telling as ever
You are one of my favorite authors and I rarely feel unsatisifed at the end of the story. But this one left me feeling really edgy. The wife's feelings really need to be explored. Her emotions, familiar to most men, could be explained in many different ways. The way you write, the dialog so realistic, would make one more chapter much more satisifying. Please finish this story.
I was so invested in your story and so sad it ended leaving me desperate to know more . I'm leaving this comment and a five star review in the hope that you add another chapter!!
you have a great story going until the ending. the last two stories in this series have sucky endings. they were great right up until then.
My wife, My wife, My wife, My wife, My wife, My wife, My wife, My wife, My wife, My wife, My wife, My wife! what an idiot!
Wife never has a name.