by j3zza
This is even more erotic than the first story.... which I thought was the best that I had ever read here! I am anxiously awaiting the next installment
I totally agree. I have never left a comment on this site but this series is awesome. Perfect for the bi-curious boy in me.
I can't believe how beautifully you write. I wish I could find a Duncan for my boyfriend! I think every guy can use intimacy like this between friends.
Subtle seduction is more erotically exciting then obvious fucking. Appreciated the correct grammer and spelling, like someone was educated.
Reading this has made me want to act out feelings I have kept hidden for 60 years! I want to try having sex with a guy... and I want to feel him inside me!
You are such a good writer and this story is so sensual and so very touching. It is the best story I've ever read. "... Each time I reached up to his shoulders, I rolled forward and my cock (which had been rock hard since massaging his ass) would press between his cheeks a little. " up to here the story is nearly the same what happened between my best friend and me. Then his hands slipped over my shoulders because of the oil and his penis slid between my ass-cheeks and pressed against my asshole. We both froze. Then I pushed my hips backwards. My friend pushed gently inside me.
Just wanted to say that I love your style of writing and your story telling. This is on of my favorite stories I've read and I've read a lot. Keep writing!
Marty & Duncan are now comfortable touching each other intimately in the nude. They share a sense of liberation. Please read the detailed body oiled massage chapter. Story is beyond overtly sensual. Highly recommended.