All Comments on 'Dungeons & Desires'

by RoseB

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

loved it....hope there is more to come

Dawn191270Dawn191270almost 6 years ago
Wow

Rose you really do have a gift . I liked this so well written and it was so enjoyable .. Thank you ..

UnrighteousUnrighteousalmost 6 years ago

I really do love your writing, will you branch out or is it a skill harnessed by the theme I wonder.

RoseBRoseBover 5 years agoAuthor
Another chapter?

Would anyone want another chapter? The response on this was rather lukewarm at best so I figured I'd ask. I had a lot of fun writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please

One of the better works on the site. Please if you would move forward.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I would love an update

SarcastodonSarcastodonover 4 years ago
A glorious first step into something greater

Even if you never actually write a second part to this, it is a wonderful beginning to Claire's journey. Of course, if you did create a second part, I think it might be more fun for the drama of it to scrap the current ending and draw out Claire's own self-acceptance for the sake of dramatic pacing.

SchismZeplinSchismZeplinalmost 4 years ago

I would soo love to read a chapter two and more! You have a great writing style...great flow its flows easy and has me wanting soo much more!

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