by RoseB
Rose you really do have a gift . I liked this so well written and it was so enjoyable .. Thank you ..
I really do love your writing, will you branch out or is it a skill harnessed by the theme I wonder.
Would anyone want another chapter? The response on this was rather lukewarm at best so I figured I'd ask. I had a lot of fun writing it.
One of the better works on the site. Please if you would move forward.
Even if you never actually write a second part to this, it is a wonderful beginning to Claire's journey. Of course, if you did create a second part, I think it might be more fun for the drama of it to scrap the current ending and draw out Claire's own self-acceptance for the sake of dramatic pacing.
I would soo love to read a chapter two and more! You have a great writing style...great flow its flows easy and has me wanting soo much more!