All Comments on 'Duped Into Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Loved the seduction, loved the Romance.

You write well, I like the building of the anticipation in the character and the reader. You do not have to be gangbanged, lesbian or straight, in order to appreciate romance. Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Ouch

Nice plot idea, but totally unrealistic. You're a man trying to write a lesbian story, aren't you?

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 7 years ago
very good

at first I thought hollie was indeed stalking her, but the more I read the more I realized that Hollie did indeed love her, too bad it took 6 years for her to do this, all that time wasted, but on the plus side it turned out to be a happy ending after all

pjebpjebabout 7 years ago
One of the ellegent few

There have been few stories on this site that are so compelling; without being overly dramatic, that I feel I must read each page before I do anything else. This story is one of them. It starts off slowly and is not what it seems to be, yet it continues; slowly drawing the reader into what is going on with the feelings of the characters. I say "BRAVO" it is very well done ! My only question is---why do the critics refuse to sign their names, but instead lash out at what they perceive as faults? Forget them and please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was romantic and I love romance.

TSreaderTSreaderabout 7 years ago
A wonderful love story!

A wonderfully written love story! Thank you!

AriannaKAriannaKabout 7 years ago
Sooo Good...

just love it, thank you

WindySwimmingWindySwimmingabout 7 years ago
Just beautiful!

Happily married hetero man that thoroughly enjoyed this story - so loving.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
Very good story!

I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you for sharing it with us!

alexwatson62alexwatson62over 4 years ago
SIMPLE 5 STARS .............

................ mainly because I didn`t deduct anything for the "creepy stalker" side of the tale lol

Nerdyqueen94Nerdyqueen94about 3 years ago

Simply put wonderful and sweet.

Nicole2023Nicole202310 months ago

Aww I need this in my life

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