All Comments on 'Duplicity Ch. 02'

Dastardly behaviour from Lord John

To the tower with him and pistols at dawn.

Nice story wws, but it really does need the errors removing as they are detracting from the flow and starting to grate.

Let's see where ch 3 takes us.

I love a good rogue! Will she escape and will he follow? Such intrigue and scandal, more!

Thanks for the comments and suggestions.

@Masterfuljim: very helpful comment. I will try to do a better job at editing from now on and using my computer may help. Been typing this story on my phone. Hope youkeep readding as I continue to spin this yarn. :-)

I've been checking back daily since the first chapter! I'm loving the story and the characters! Looking forward to more :)

I've just stumbled across this story and I'm loving it so far. There are a few editing things but I'd your typing it out on your phone you're doing a great job of it! Can't wait to read more as the plot develops :)

Hmm,I don't like Lord Davenport one bit right now.He is so full of himself and so ready to judge others.She should have mentioned his assault to Prince Edward.And that he had accused her of being the prince's paramour.

Your attention to detail, the historical observations, the dialogue is perfect. I'm enjoying reading this so much.

Hope you enjoy writing as much as your readers enjoy your work. The story just gets better and better and I can only hope that it is a continuing success. Please do not abandon it as so many other great efforts on this site have been so often.