All Comments on 'Duplicity Ch. 03'

well done! i loved how you had a longer chapter. cant wait to see what lady ann will do she seems quite sneaky. tsk tsk john hes got fate on his side, but we shall see.

cant wait for more!

Thanks for your comment. Hoping that if you'll stick with me here and you'll be entertained with an interesting story along with some steamy scenes. As always I appreciate any and all feedback. Happy Holidays.

Waiting in anticipation here for the next installment!! We need you!

Oh, please, please, please! Keep developing this great story further! It's one of the most intriguing and exciting in here.

This is very well written and I'm itching to know what happens next

I'm really enjoying your characters and the direction you're taking with this story, but I hope that you will get an editor. There are a lot of typos and grammatical errors that can be rather distracting. For example, the Prince of Whales belongs in The Little Mermaid!

One can only hope that Lady Ann is not as duplicitous as the title hints!

Great story that keeps getting better. So much potential and can't wait to see where it goes.