All Comments on 'During the Football Game Ch. 01'

dropped my rating by 3--Then 1 more for the oversized boobs

this is fantasy so to remove points because of oversized cock or tits is crazy. It was well written, erotic and descriptions well done. Plot is not the strong suit, so it is average as far as incest plot. But as erotic fantasy - well done.

I sure wish you could only comment with your screen name. A lot of the assholes would shut up then! They are just cowards anyway!

I don't know what oversized tits or cocks has to do with ratings... to each his own (or HER own). The leg massage was a perfect way to lead into things... just how it might really happen. Thanks for a great story.

I'd leave my name, but I can't remember my password... sorry.

I am a 42H female - mine would be classed as oversized, wouldn't they? So if anyone wrote a true story about me, that idiot would deduct points? What a jerk. This was a great story and certainly got me going nicely. I LOVED the build-up.

This is the first time in 5 years on Literotica I've read every single word in a story and this is my first time I felt compelled to comment. Great. And I've been reading erotica for over 10 years. Its all about that build up and the reality of it. I'm excited to see a long list of stories on your profile.

i got two-thirds of the way down the first page before i had a violent orgasm. dammm baby u can write. i think i came before she did in ur story. thnnx. em

this is by far my favorite story i loved the ending

My fav story, the build up of the massage on the lounge

Why does being a dipshit always means you also want to do it anonymously? Not that all anonymous folks are dipshits, of course...Just the ones with no vision, or imagination...Loser city at work...LOVED your beginning by the way...

Good story, Didn't like the silly baby talk dialogue in places but otherwise - excellent. Made me come hard!

Excellent story. I hope that the story continues for more daddy/daughter sexual adventures.

I gave you a 5 because the Lions won, the story was damn good too.

How we know its a fantasy.. Lol.. Detroit having a good team (Just kidding!! I joke ) Great story :-)

This chapter receives a rare ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating from me... Great build-up with the massage by Daddy and his slowly testing the father-daughter boundaries. Appreciate the first person narrator.

Love the whole caressing and first time aspect. Any ladies to rp e.mail me.

Fun read but went from 0 to 100 way too quickly.

how a massage can lead to more without really thinking about it was how things started with me and my daughter, only she was giving me the massage after a hard days work.