All Comments on 'Dutch Treat Ch. 01'

I liked your story, but it turned out to be more of a tease than a complete story. I do hope you plan to finish it.

I want to compliment you on the way you suggested a Dutch atmosphere. One thing: the name you used for the student should be spelled Jeroen. I am Dutch. LOL

It took a little time to catch on what was happening. We started off with conversation and plans with Sohpia and we switch with a creative woman named Dominique, who kept her body in great condition by swinning so much she was called a merimaid. It was a good read, but it took a little long to get the gist of the sexuality of this chapter.