All Comments on 'Duty Bound'

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gentleoneexplorergentleoneexplorerover 8 years ago
I want more

This is well written and suspenseful. I wonder though if the King is duty bound, to take his Queen while she is bound or is it just the first time? It was confusing for a bit but surprising as well. I hope you write more of this story so we see what the protocol is in the Kingdom or if the Queen will ever not just be prepared and used without affection.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A bit of preparation..

But the sex is simply wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am. Erotic? Nope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good stuff

It is a little confusing, I'll grant that, but a great read to be sure. I get that the King made up the whole story about his impotence to get the Queen into that position (and get the handmaiden to help), but I don't get why. If he was trying to ease her into it, it probably would have been less stressful for her if he'd just done it himself, rather than frighten her with the prospect of giving herself to a stranger.

Still, a great story and I hope there are more where that came from!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Beautiful vignette

What a lovely story. Thank you!

Tess (UK)

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