by Horhay_J
Looking forward to her getting in to the lessons, also don't be afraid to write longer chapters.
......wow. Great talent, great story. Don't let this theme die. If you hit a road block, ask for help. This could be a VERY good series.
Unusual scenerio. Very effective. I just thank that, with so much rum in her, Rachel could have been badly hurt.
This story is amazing and though it is true that taking the rum through the anal apening is the quickest way to get drunk it is also a way to die. You should put a warning at the top of the story.