All Comments on 'Dwelling in Desire Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
This should be in the comedy section 😂

For the highest number of times that Curt gets cockblocked by everything. LOL when is the next chapter gonna get uploaded? Poor Curt and Beth. At least Joe and Kate was very upfront about everything lol please have them hookup on the next chapter. For both of their sanity. At this point Curt is gonna loose his mind lol

ElizaJane311ElizaJane311about 6 years ago

OMG, I love this story. The suspense itself is so sexy. And Curt's POV...so hot. Keep up the fantastic work. I am so eager for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I T C H I N G

NEED NEED NEEED MOOOORE

I've been looking and looking for a story like this. Thank god I found you. Please dont stop writing this one. I'm so keyed up it's insaaaaaaane.

Just the perfect blend of seduction and anticipation. The teasing is everything. Please please update soon!!! THANK YOU

joodlejoodleabout 6 years agoAuthor
In response...

Thanks for your comments! I stated pretty clearly in my first chapter's notes that this is more of a thrill-in-the-chase series. Many of you seem to appreciate that, and some seem to appreciate it but want a wrap up as soon as possible. Sorry to the latter. No can do. The possibilities of what it can be are too delicious to end this prematurely. Thank you for your ongoing support, and I promise to try and make it worth your while in the end. xoxox --J

Blovely4youBlovely4youabout 6 years ago
God Damn it

We were almost there! So fucking close! Ugh! Swear to God, I'm almost mad at you lmao.

Can't wait for the next one!

joodlejoodleabout 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks BLovely

I’m mad at me too. I swear today I really really wanted to get it all over with. But I can’t. It’s gonna be good. I had a fave author once who was really good but liked to end stories prematurely, and with less than earth shattering climaxes. I stopped reading their work because it just got too flimsy. I like quality and Goddammit I’m gonna have quality on this one. You’ll wait Blovely. And you’ll thank me later. At least I update regularly right? Xoxo

jooney_007jooney_007about 6 years ago
Ohmygodiloveyou!

This is great! The hanging in suspense is gonna be uncomfortable but if you say it'll be worth it, it'll be worth it! Loved it! Chewing my nails and laughing out loud to this! The sexual tension is fabulous! Can't wait! Keep up the excellent work!

mmmgeschichtenmmmgeschichtenabout 6 years ago
STOP TEASING ME!!!

Fuck Fuck Fuck... so close... you're just cruel...

And I really would love to see Curt and Bethany 'go through' there house and curt demands her to provide furnishing for their "special needs"

"Come here Bethany, stand in the doorframe!" We need rings, here, here and here...

Bethany kneel down just here... yeah... we will need two rings here and here..."

And so forth... that would be soooo sexy.

Cuddos...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
This is killing me slowly,

but in a good way. Thanks for making me feel like a teenager. It's kind of funny when you are 69.

I soooo love it. 'See through me' was exceptional, but this story is just out of this world. Thanks again.

Lido_77Lido_77over 3 years ago

Okkaaayyy. Yeah there’s such a thing as “slow build”, but this is “excruciatingly PAINFUL!!”

Especially for erotica dude. You’re literally killing me. And not in a good way. I’m literally pissed off right now.

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601over 1 year ago

Love, love, love everything about this.

And you set it in my hole turf - Chicago! Everything you’d done to set the story here had been solid, until you showed that Curt is NOT a Chicagoan.

Nobody, and I mean NOBODY in Chicago calls the Kennedy, Edens, Eisenhower, Stevenson or Dan Ryan a “freeway”. We laugh and ridicule anyone who does. They are called “expressways”, or occasionally “highways” until they reach the burbs and become “tollways”.

But, still loving this!

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