All Comments on 'Dwelling in Desire Ch. 11'

Beautiful writing. Lovely story

Omg yes!!!!! I have been waiting for this since the beginning and it was amazing!!! I can’t wait to read more

I know you may have felt a lot of pressure to publish the next chapter, but it's about time that they finally did it! I forgot about Tina, but you know what, you did such a good job with the Tina chapter that reading her name brought a burning hatred into my heart. I love the passion between Curt and Beth. Personally wished the first time went on a little longer, but still, the hot, pent-up need was there. I can't wait for the next chapter xx

You didn't feel uncomfortable opening his trunk of depravity, did you? Get it done.

I literally snort laughed at that part! Nice work Friend!

First, This should have been placed in romance and moved to bdsm when the storyline finally got there. I found myself skimming most of the chapters, then when it got to Joe and his wife, I read, then back to skimming.

All of a sudden Beth's work is done and they can jump each other. With him incessantly calling her Baby. Possibly there is a more original name you could have chosen. I would love to see them together, but you dragged the story out just to be a pita about it, then the monumental moment was like a baby toot. Very anti-climatic. I know you can do better. And much better than the ever overused "baby" .

Hello all. Well, being a rookie author, this was a lesson that needed learning for me. Lesson being that I should never, EVER, EVER, allow the urgent pleas of my readers to hasten my writing. Never again. In truth, I think Ch 11 could have been better, although I'm not sure exactly how since everyone seems to want to just cut to the chase, and I feel it may have been rushed. I do have a few arguments to make though, if anyone is interested. First point is that if one delivers a sex scene mid series that cannot be bested, it leaves no opportunity for things to get hotter down the line. And what fucking fun is that? Point 2, my goal with Curt and Beth is to have things be DIFFERENT than with Kate and Joe. As in, not rushed, not obscene, not degrading. No "cunt". No "whore". It is supposed to appeal to a different demographic so to speak, so I can see how some who enjoyed See Through Me might be a tad disappointed. For now. I am leaving room for things to escalate. Point 3, Curt doesn't want to scare Bethany off now that he has broken down barrier number one. So the kink thing will be worked in gradually. Yes, perhaps I should have categorized it differently, but so far in my stories I am isolating each series into a single genre, though I am open to changing that policy. The problem with putting this in the romance section is that ultimately there will be some stuff that vanillas will seriously dislike. I was looking to spare those people discomfort, people fucking pleaser that I fucking am. Point 4, one thing that I have tried to maintain is a reality element. Sex doesn't last forever, and it is almost never perfect. But the intensity, the longing, the urgency and strain I believe I at least came close to capturing, even if it wasn't a ten. That's it for my justification. It would have been nice to see some feedback from every reader that was pushing me to go faster...give and take and whatnot. But at least it taught me a valuable lesson as a Lit author, and that is not to rush. No matter how much people beg. My approach with Joe and Kate was one submission per month, steadily over the course of a year. So of course people arriving late to the party probably wonder why the hell are they so different? Perhaps this is part of the reason. Well from now on, I go at my own pace. No pressure, no bullshit. I will deliver the hotness on my terms, in my own time. Love to all of my declared fans and closet fans alike. xoxox J

Whew! I thought i was going to cream my pants after reading this! Thank you for submitting another chapter. I look forward to more!

We waited for the "boy-gets-girl/girl-gets-boy"-moment and you delivered on our anticipation.

Now the whole pacing of the story needs to change. The chasing-part is done, now comes the hard part - building a life together. You gave us some hints where the demons with the two are.

I'll give the next part a lot of attention, even more then this part because from an author-point of view I can't wait how you'll do it. You have there something like two stories with two different pacings and I want to know how you will keep this two things together.

Like allways I'd like to thank you for your time and effort and please, take your time and don't burn out.

Cuddos.

Hawt.

Looking forward to more.

And I wholeheartedly agree with 'never, ever rush'! Please don't be disturbed by petty criticism of readers who feel entitled to have YOU write exactly what THEY have in mind. YOU are great, YOUR story is great. Thank you for the time and effort you invest in our amusement.

I stopped checking your page for a while as it just got too much to keep waiting! This was amazing. I much prefer this to STM and am loving their relationship. Can't wait for more! Thank you, Joodle. You are the best.

First, I love a long tease as long as I get the payoff.

Second, you are an excellent writer, giving enough detail without getting boring.

Third, thankfully Curt and Bethany finally got together.

Lastly, please don't end the story here. A night of lovingly popping her cherryIs not going to be enough. It's time that he introduces her to some hardcore spanking and fucking.

I have read all of your stories so far and have marked you as a Favorite Author

When do we get more???

Lovely thank you for checking in. I am working on chapter 12. Don't worry I am not going to disappear off the face of the planet like many, but I am trying not to fuck things up by getting lazy and winded. This next one will be a longer chapter than average, probably about as long as chapter 11. It's a transitional chapter so it's tedious for me to write. Hope I can get it out within a couple weeks. :) xoxo J

Joodle,

Sorry I didn't pause to give each chapter a 5 star rating.

Keep writing, I'll keep reading. Thanks.

Alan