All Comments on 'Dying Wish'

Brilliant concept

Out of the norm

....................................Fantastic

Thank you.

Would have liked a continuation.

Not at all what I expected , BUT A GREAT STORY ! 5*s are very very hard to get from me but YOU EARNED THEM !

Thanks for the great read !

tx cracker

Different but great story.

Weird but cool.

Wow. An amazing story.

serious food for thought.

the screening process of who gets treated would be both rewarding and horrific.

I have been a reader of Literotica for over 10 years. This is one of the best fiction/sex I have ever read. You covered all the points that would normally be missed by a Author. Very good writing in the first person and consideration for the feelings of the patients. Just a very feel-good story and a very well deserved 5. Wish I could rate higher, but Literotica frowns.

A minor error you might consider correcting: you twice wrote that new patients at the E.C. would be chosen "by ballet". But what if they can't dance?

I think you meant 'by ballot'. Otherwise, you'd only be treating ballet dancers at the clinic-- you know, dying swans and star-crossed lovers and the like!

Interesting and unusual story idea but enjoyed it :)

Thanks for sharing with us.

As a cancer survivor who endured the full shitstorm

Gotta say...I wish......

In a world where it’s hard to know what choices to make ... finding this Author and this Story is a happy event! 🧐

- pal