All Comments on 'Dynamics of a Human Heart Ch. 01'

by Tyler_H

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MaximguyMaximguyalmost 11 years ago
Good.

I'm concerned about the betrayal and drama you suggest is coming, but I'm diggin this so far. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I am an absolute fan of random Japanese phrases intermingled with normal speech n u've done it PERFECT!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good set up

Stage is set pieces are moving. Keep things interesting.

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