All Comments on 'Dynamics of a Human Heart Ch. 06'

Love the story so far. It's nearly driving me crazy waiting for the next chapters.

I really don't want to wait another month (or more) for the next part. The wait's going to hurt, but I really love this series so it'll be worth it.

My heart breaks for Grey and Miranda.I need more. It cannot possibly end there.

Really good story.

Sigh. On one hand, clever idea with the king. On the other, the author and the character of COURSE fucked it up. The King is given (left) by Edmon Dantes at the end for Fernan - I won't bother unpacking full symbolism here but it's easily googleable.... point is, she betrayed Grey in his eyes, so giving her the king, is his recognition of that betrayal. Oh yeah, and the supposedly "intelligent" bint didn't see the obvious, that the final gambit in his apaetment, was another example of the same thing he did for her when their dumbfuckedness forced him to help them - he got them angry at him to preserve their relationship, even though one of him is worth 10000 of them,