All Comments on 'Dynamics of a Human Heart Ch. 08'

the emotions....its simply superb as opposed to some of the stories which run entirely on incidents....waiting for more descriptions and a clearer background of Grey

This is a brilliant story.

I have a love hate relationship with Grey. After this though, it is certainly more on the love side. Looking forward to hearing more about Grey and how he came to where he is

Publishable level stuff here. I was glad to see the new chapter up. Thanks for a good read.

I could not put it down, but ...

There has been a lot of time compression here. For dramatic effect, no doubt.

People don't heal that fast. Infections don't set in that fast. Doctors don't castrate young men that fast, they try stuff 1st.

Still, very good as I said.

I could not put it down !

This tension between Grey and Miranda... Makes one think that if they ever decide to flout moral codes of faithfulness (especially as Miranda's now affianced), there'll be fireworks. Not to mention, an almost hairpin-bend-like curve in Miri and Sam's shared life. Though thinking of Grey unraveling at her touch... Something to wonder about. His response, "Something MORE...", gives me.... Ideas, to say the least. A very gripping, very well thought out plot. Thank you for sharing this with us. Waiting for more of this brilliance!

Miri is just as disgusting as the rest of the chapters. She's the reason people like Hilgrove win.