by poetposh
DAMN ANYWAYS!! A dead end. That was some good readin (once you are able to look past the errors)
Oh God this was heavenly! Mum, cum, pee all in one! I'm only just discovering the joy of pee... the other day I urinated a lot into a large glass, after an overwhelming masturbation (I didn’t want to get up yet, and the glass was close by). Then, just for the hell of it as I felt so lovely and open to literally everything, I sipped it to see how it tasted. Surprisingly, it was like hot Japanese tea! Fortunately it was very pale and delicate, not like a deep yellow morning pee! So I slowly, deliciously drank the large glassfull all at one go. Oh God it was so exciting and sooo delicious - I felt so free and wild and mad to have done that! It was like loving myself like never before... Now I want to share the pleasure - I think my new gf may be up for it...
This was a fantastic story. So sad that this is the last chapter. As many years have passed, I assume there will not be more, too bad, You did an excellent job. Great story idea!
Great set of six chapters - more please. But you really need a competent and experienced editor to check your work before uploading, as it's riddled with typos, spelling mistakes, vocabulary errors, wrong grammar and punctuation fails, all of which drastically diminish the reading pleasure of your fans.
Every chapter was hot and fun to read. Hopefully you'll have more stories coming soon.
Thanks
My cum which I let loose when she peed in his mouth and he came. Love this story.
Please post more!!That was an awesoe strory,my cock was so fucking hard
How long before we het chapter 7 and how long before we get o read about him eating her pussy and fucking it. I truly hope he gets to fuck her, cum in her and then share the cum with her.
This is the best mother son story I ever read in literotic.Even better than 'Northern light'. U need to add little more nature to the background(may be mom son hiking). U have no idea how horny this story made me. Next time add little more piss play, may be like pissing in kitchen or piss drinking from a bottle or glass and they watching together some hardcore incest piss porn. And may be some spit swaping too... nd nxt time U need to turn her frm innocent mom to a nasty mom.I wish i had a son who could do this together with me.. Thanks again for your story
an editor! Several here @ literotica- free, even! I'm one myself, but no name, so it's fair. Like the story line a lot.
Very hot, but all the typos were a distraction. Clean those up, and it would be a 5 rather than a 4
Thanks for your stories...Plz write stories like 'Northern Light-Dr hook', which is my favrit story in literotica. It was perfet if it was yours.. A Romance betwn mom and son with a litl piss play(may be 3 or 4 gulp, thts enoguh), Nothing is hoter than that. Plz write something like that(btwn mom/son or Bro/sis.. but, both as independent stories), thnks
I would give you a 5 but you really need an editor to correct your spelling and word usage..good story line.
I've had two lady friends who enjoyed pee games. They enjoyed giving and receiving showers. Hope I can find another friend again.