by Kylie24
Kylie,
This type story is not on my usual reading list, but you did a superb job. You are a very good writer, I will continue to look for your works.
Corsair
This has a lot of potential, keep going. I looked at your bio curious about your age because of your writing style, but it only said over 18.
I will be waiting for part 2.
A great job of telling a lovely story. Keep up the good work and please tell us more.
There's a really warm and touching aspect to the way the two characters interact. Sort of romance meets lust and curiosity. Well written!