All Comments on 'Early Morning Birthday Present'

It's a rather bland account. I am puzzled, though. Author says the wife lied, using the past tense of to lie, meaning to say an untruth. but that meaning does not fit the context! Why could the poor woman not just "lay" there, luxuriously recling in the past tense of to lie, meaning to recline. Does anyone edit these stories?

---Katib

You would get a higher rating if this little stroke story were in the erotic coupling category instead of Loving Wives. There is no story here, just sex. If I don't get a minimum plot combined with some kind of character description, I just don't care because it's only words strung together without any merit.

liked it.

But short!! Good to see a straight story instead of something like a gangbang, or such..

What a lovely way to wake the wife up on her birthday an early morning loving fuck.