All Comments on 'Earth Day Rally'

Anyone from Ohio knows about the mob's influence in northern Ohio. That's how things are run. So DJ's story has credibility. When it began I thought the husband was going to cheat due to his history, so it was interesting to see the innocent wife fall instead. However after that, because of the mob ties, I just knew the conspirators didn't stand a chance of living until the end. So there wasn't much tension. Things turned out just the way I would have thought they would. Other than that, I think it's another great DGH story.

My Friend, Looks like you did your homework. A good author always does his/her homework when writing a story with content instead of just stroke stories. once again, another winner.

<p>This is a good story, because.....</p>

<p>The wife cheats on her husband, but because she came to him, and confessed, and the husband had the other man killed, this made the marriage stronger? That because he good to prove his epeen was bigger this made the marriage stronger? That it was ok to "not" kill the wife, but the lover all best are off? How is that "NOT" the actions of two depraved people. The husband for having him killed and the wife for giving up sex and "more love" because he would, and did, kill for her?</p>

<p>This was twisted. If he wasn't going to kill her he shouldn't have had the lover killed. That just sad, and it says a lot about the people that that think this is a great ending. Where they renew their love over the murder of the wife's lover. Just sad</p>

-Eric

stories by this writer... Please keep them coming

It's a great story because it was well written and realistic. I learned a long time ago that most men will forget their principles and do anything in the name of politics. He had ties to the mob so his course of action was not out of character. I believe the wife was unaware her husband knew beforehand she had cheated. <P>

I am not a violent person but hey it's just a story. Granted considerably different from the majority of unbelievably forgiving husbands depicted on this site.

could relate to both current and former such folks. Yep a lot of them it seems mirror some of this story.

I don't usually like reconciliation stories where the cheater gets a free pass, but somehow this one works. I didn't see Zack being faithful, especially after his wife cheats, but I give him credit for avoiding the temptation to stray. I think Sharon really did learn her lesson. Good story.

and I sure as hell wasn't disappointed this time either!!!!! As has always been the case, I enjoyed your story very much. I appreciate the time, energy and talent you put into entertaining your readers.

I can't understand how anyone cannot enjoy your stories. It's not about sex but about people. All people have flaws and you are able to point them out. It's easy to see the poiitical and mob ties in this story. One has to take all that into consideration when reading this. It's not about what I would have done, but what would the characters have done.

Another great read DG. I just wish you would write more often. I miss the good authors who know how to tell a story and keep my interest. You're one of the few left.

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Sorry

I could never vote for this guy, he likes cream pie! But then again, he's not a man - he's a lawyer AND a politician. I do understand he needs to be married, but the slut got off way to easy. I'm hoping he gets himself a sweet little "Lewenski" after he gets elected.

Near the very last part of the story when the two policemen were talking with the couple.

"Senator and Mrs. Medley, you have been forthright in answering all our questions. Now I'll try and explain how Mr. Medley was killed. This should have been "Morten"

Damned good except for this one error in editing.

Great story with an actual plot. Good luck in the contest.

aren't perfect. Thanks for another realistic story DG. Good luck in the contest.

Another fine tale of people who are not perfect, just closer to normal. Yet the male lead is one of your least likeable characters ever. Just good old fashioned storytelling at it's best!

Realistic and just a little sleazy Politics.

That our cold bitchy, No-I-Don't-Do-Job-Jobs wives would do it like Sharon here did that bad-assed Randy man, and then towards the end of the affairs, suck our dicks dry like what happens here!!! LOL <p>

"Oh, my god, dear husband, you are just the best! For forgiving me like that! From now on, you will never have to beg me for a blow job, y'hear? I've had plenty of practice on Randy, that bad man who died so, er, mysteriously,,, so from now on, all you have to do --- for having giving me this second and last chance --- snap your fingers and I know you, my loving and beloved husband, want

a nice blow job!" LOL <p>

It's fuckin' stupid, DG Hear. Completely retarded, too, I should quickly add. <p>

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"Zack, please tell me you didn't know about this before the police arrived." <p>

"Sharon, you're not going to like this but you asked for it. If I had known about you and this Randy guy before you told me about him, he wouldn't have been alone in that hot tub." <p>

"Oh my god, why wouldn't you have just divorced me?" <p>

"Sharon, I've been slowly falling in love with you. I could never divorce you. I took a vow to care for you until death, not divorce us do part. I will live by that vow." <p>

"Zack I'm scared. I realized what a big mistake I made and that's why I came to you." <p>

"There's no need to be scared. I've thought about it and I will give you a second chance for being honest with me. I must tell you that there won't be a third. Also, the part of our sexual life where you don't like giving head. It's going to change." <p>

She came over to me and kissed me very passionately. I was sitting on the couch. She kneeled on the floor in front of me, undid my belt buckle, and unzipped my fly. She reached in and pulled out my growing cock; she smiled at me and proceeded to give me one of the best blowjobs that I have ever received. <p>

Politics and corruption go hand in hand more often than not, so this storys' premise is all too realistic. Tightly written and well plotted. Good one, DG.

There are a couple minor things about this story which prevent me from giving it a higher score but it's a pretty good one overall.

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This is more than just a LW story. It is also a political thriller in some ways. For somebody concerned about political connections and the political game the husband went into this marriage not really knowing much about the wife. A thorough background check would have revealed her connection to Randy.

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When the police came to the door they knew how the wife's lover was killed. An the autopsy would of clearly showed a blow to the head so that the wife's story would have checked out when she confessed about hitting him the head with the wine bottle.

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The ending seems a little contrived to forced. Certainly the husband /politician is not a decent person --at least at the start of the story. And in some ways I do understand Risq' post. But these are relatively minor issues... and in my opinion did not justify giving this story a score of 00 or 25.

Good luck in the contest. A8

Loved the point of view for this once DG. I didnt like him but i was drawn into the story. i admire a writer who is able to tap into such a character.

Good luck in the contest

For me the guy had to go down because he would have something on my wife with which he could create problems later on. I really did not see any reason to exchange the wife for another model. At this point in life they all would come with same defects.....

Fine story, the funny part being the fact that I liked the naive cheating wife, and disliked the hero... Of course,

he does deserve respect!

Excellent writing skills DG. It allows me to actually experience the stories as if I was there. As far as, Zack and Sharon being candidates for the White House, they definitely possess all the desired character traits and qualifications for being the President and First Lady. At least by today’s standards.

I liked the unpredictability of the plot! It played well mostly with the aspects of the story which identify it as a thriller. As far as the relations go, that's where some price was paid. We are kind of required to accept the assumption that in thrillers, not much emphasis is paid to psychologically convincing character. Up to a point it may be true, and I think that in this story, despite my personal wishes for ‘more’ in terms of both main characters being rather two dimensional, the story worked anyway.<P>

The story had its own political/social commentary center of gravity, and if all we had was a rather flat “senator” type and a repressed and rather shallow “senator’s wife” type to carry the plot, it still worked pretty well in the overall fast moving thriller framework of the story.

this on? Could have been any of a large number.

Thank you so much for writing.

Keep writing - I really enjoy your strories especially your loving wives tales.

But I liked it.

The one hestiation I have is the wife sticking around. On the one hand, knowing that your husband would kill you has to be unsettling. On the other, it's a nice way to say that you are passionate about someone and a grisly way to set a few boundaries. Now they both know where they stand.

Then again, she probably knows that leaving isn't exactly a safe option.

Thank you for writing.

Bachelor politician grows up and falls in love -

The egotist in all of them showed well and the connections worked perfectly

Nice insights and great execution - um and the story was well done too lol

he was your typical hard nosed cheating lying scum politician who treated his wife like shit....then has a guy murdered for screwing his wife...reminds you of many such high powered politics than will do anything to win...just like Trump...

I didn't care for this one as much as your other stories, but I did enjoy reading it. This one seemed almost as if it was being narrated by someone, with main character cameos scattered throughout. The political aspects seemed realistic, coldly logical, much like one would expect to find with one of today's political power couples. She doesn't really seem the type though; doesn't have her mind singularly focused like he does. If she did, she'd have known the threat of killing her with the boyfriend was empty - there's no way the senator's team would have allowed her body to found in such a manner - it would have generated too much bad press. Good story, enjoyed it. Thanks!

Really stupid ending.

Concrete in a hot tub!

Actually, he would have suffocated relatively quickly, not lasting anywhere near 10 hours. As his chest grew smaller by exhaling, the slurry would move in closer to him. His next inhalation would have to expand his chest against the weight of the slurry, which would have quickly made breathing impossible.

I suppose the killers could have stopped adding cement when the slurry reached somewhat above his diaphragm, allowing him labored breathing, which would let him survive longer. (They would also have to keep him from standing.)

...as usual by this writer. Great job! 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

Haven't even seen that murder method in a movie or anywhere else. Zack has all the qualifications to be President. Reminds me of Bill Clinton, he who I voted for once.

I've poured a lot of concrete over the years. One thing about it that wasn't mentioned was as it sets up it can get rather warm depending on the temperature around it. Just the weight of it and the water would make it tough to breathe. He would have had a long time to reflect on his past sins, I would expect the guys who did this would have made sure he knew who the thank. Hope they didn't use quick set on the bastard so he had plenty of time. Signed: BTW

Why would she still have the ripped blouse?.Surely she would throw it away when she got the new one.

5*

This story-line sure keeps us glued to the story.

Why do I hate Sharon?

BJ

Damned good story.

Wow, now that was a great story. Sharon was so lucky she basically came to her senses, came clean to her husband and begged for forgiveness. I think she got the message when her husband told her she would have been in the tub full of concrete if he had found out about the affair before she confessed everything to him. I think she definitely learned her lesson. The way her former boyfriend ended up in the concrete hot tub just confirmed his mob connections. Well done. 5/5

Wonderfully shady ;-)

Why would she take the ripped blouse home,instead of throwing it away?.

Great story about unscrupulous people. 5 stars.