by Imperator_9
I don't get why author write stories about whore mother's. Then sleep with them unprotected. It's disgusting and doesn't turn me on.
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A simple premise, visited many times before. But! Here the writing is a genuine sharing of the writer & his delight in his Mother. Eventually, we even have a 'saving' of the Mother & a natural progression of sexual sharing. I also commend the development of the writer's adjectives when referring to this progression. Quite impressive. And to conclude: The reward of his Mother's cunt was delightfully constructed. They both deserved each other's fucking. 10 x Stars.
This was such a well written story, definitely 5 stars. Thanks for sharing.
An oft-visited plot, but superbly told! I loved your run-on sentences and vivid imagery, especially the line: "It is the scalding flavour of crumbling walls."
Thanks for this one! Pushes my Mommy buttons very nicely...
A sadly delightful tale. You've done a great job with the characters in this short story. I would like to read more about their relationship. The young man is very mature and understanding with a difficult situation. Please continue to explore these characters.
An impressive job of engaging all the senses...which is painfully lacking in this category. 5 Stars.
That was amazingly done and it was not too long nor too short! Inspirational!
and building climate of incest. And original writing. I'd read your previous stories but this one is better than all i had read.
I never leave comments, but this story was worth it. From the title to, " very, very happy," you have crafted a fine piece of work. Thank you.
I would tell her to find another place to slut herself out. whore story...