All Comments on 'Eat & Greet with a Famous Singer'

This is very well written, particularly if it is your first submission. I wondered why you continued the story beyond where Devonne subordinated Ana. I felt after that it seemed to lose its feeling of reality. I also wondered why a woman was being sexually suffocated and yet there was no real description of the weapon used. I think a description would have given the story a broader base and offered some relief from the thought process of the narrator. These are minor quibbles and the strength of the story overtakes them. I particularly liked the narrator's attitude at the beginning, it took me ages to figure it was a woman, for a long time I thought it was a man. Thank you and keep writing. I thought it was wonderful. I also wondered which real life star you had in mind.

Nothing new just the latest writer making sure the male MC is emasculated and made to be a total loser. Of course then you have to make main female character an instant slut and betray her so called love. Ridiculous

This is my all thing favourite story ❤️