by susansnow
The WF/WM/BF scenario was erotic. However the story was too short and too rushed.
Tags for the story are wrong, and it's short, but this is a hot little tale.
You get right to it which is what the reader is after. Threesomes are a delight, even those that are not as perfect as your characters. Who does not adore black women?
Your last line about "meat" is not the best description for a cock but a little edit isn't a bad thing. Don't know if you recall this story, it is so long ago in the life of a mayfly.
short, and felt like a wasted opportunity. no actual penetration. this is that 'weak threesome' stuff. and why does the tag say 'two men one woman sex'?