All Comments on 'Ebony Seduction'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012about 7 years ago
Not a bad start

I guess good things do come to those who wait for it, I do hope there is more to come

plumberdonplumberdonabout 7 years ago
Patience pays off

What a lovely story of one who has patience. You wrote it well Loved it - Thanks

BarnengBarnengabout 7 years ago
Nice

Waiting for patiently for less number 2. Keep this story going.

GraphicNovelArtistGraphicNovelArtistabout 7 years ago
great story and characters

Love your writing style. Hoping there is more of this story to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wonderful as Always

Your writing skills and style never cease to surprise me. This was an amazing story that emphasized the quote "good things come to those who wait for it" I absolutely loved this and think it deserves a part 2! I can't find anything wrong with this even if I tried; in both story arc and writing detail!

Thanks for sharing! OoOoOo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Oh my gosh

I'm so fucking wet.

Cindy1001Cindy1001about 7 years ago
On the job

I am a huge fan of learning on the job! Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hot story

a very erotic story, got me going at work ;) keep it up x

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Mealmost 7 years ago
Mmm.

Nice introduction into this series. I'm going to enjoy reading the next four chapters. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Keisha Sounds Lovely,,, Sweet And Sexy!!

Hallo Bree,

Your writing is amazing,,, it's beautiful and very realistic, I can recognize people I see everyday in your stories,,, and I can think of a few things I would love to have Keisha, do for me,,, yes!

It's a 5&1 _ 5-Stars and 1-Very Hot Wet Muschi!

Gay Kat.

Wkd_MaceyWkd_Maceyalmost 6 years ago
Loved it :)

Recommended by a mutual friend, and I wasn't disappointed. You go down as a favourite ('scuse the pun ;)

PixiehoffPixiehoffalmost 5 years ago
This is so hot

I loved this. You lead up to it with the tension mounting, and by the time they consummated their lust, I was ready for it. Thank you.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyalmost 3 years ago

Aome youngsters are eager to learn amd some are talented too ...... Yes your art of writing is entertaining and gripping

O2O2over 2 years ago

Nice! I hope you write something new soon.

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Happily married to my Mistress/wife. I write mainly lesbian stories but I am trying to branch out some. I love to write scenes, not full length stories as I feel they are more intimate. I do sometimes take requests. If you have a lesbian fantasy, email me. :) Update: 7/30/1...

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