All Comments on 'Echoes, November and Incense'

My first impression was that this was a tough story to get through. It's difficult to find a point in the narrative that is grounded in a sense of reality. The author paints a very frightening panarama of psychoses, the everyday sense of fighting to hold on to a sane perspective, and yet everywhere the protagonist goes the circumstances of realtiy reinforce the delusional characteristics of her nightmares. Where is the boundary line between reality and delusion? Was that the author's point?

Not an erotic story, the author has a talent for metaphors that lends a chromaticism to the writing that marks an unusually interesting talent. It would be interesting to see her palette take on the erotic world.

Ah well, sometimes there are authors on this site. Sometimes they even have a truce with poetry... You seem to be one. Cheers Yoron.